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Midnight Duel
Size: Large, Medium, Small Tue Jun 10, 08 11:45 PM | Category: All
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And Alex Poling aka

Shin Moto Alexander 9kAnbu ...Original Poem

 

 

***** Do not Steal ****

 

 

 

 

A battle over sumthing

thats old as time itself
two warriors drawing blades
wanting to take the others health
two masked trained ninjas ready to be damned to hell
standing in the moon light furiated and decieved well
Each sucame to love and was cheated in a way
but now they both stand fighting ready to take from the other her away
her husband standing in blue his clans color this a fact
the other a thieving assassin standing mysteriously in black
a shadow from the tree far off in the distance stands
a girl in a summer yukata fearfully shaken at there demands
For what made this woman yearn to put them both threw this
why would she decieve her husband and seek from another bliss
the answer to this the world will never know
cuz at the clash of thunder theese warriors begin the show
they dash in a rage blades drawn seeking to crush the others heart
kunai and shurikan flying from the one dressed in dark
the blade of the ninja dressed in midnight blue
easily evades them as if sum how he already knew
as the wind blows in

a single solid gust
for a second they both pause

as if remembering for her there lust
but from the first second after the one appears behind the other
his body paralyzed in aw " are u ready my brother "
the ninja in black feels the husbands furious anger and all of his rage
 as he punches the mysteriouse ninja cracking most definetly his rib cage
but in a puff of smoke the assassin dissapears

leaving the blue bleeding from his back
he landed a poisened dart deeply effecting nervouse system now off track
so now standing across from each other glarring eye to eye
they both know this will not end till one of them is to die
The man in blue calmy says in a clear voice
" i thought we ended this long ago was it not her choice"
The man in black replies " this is a matter of the heart, i could not let her go when she left my world was torn apart"
but now " we are married what your doing is so wrong"
This is why were fighting " let fate decided the edning of this love song"
They begin to dash the ending drawing oh so near
The woman in the distance over struck

Shanking violantly in fear.
The ninjas take a leap jumping to a godly hieght
The blades clshing together the steal making a sound of frieght
The both drop to the ground weakened and out of breath
They both drop to there knees There lives fading
almost nothing left
The one in blue collaps's falling down face first
The black embraces to his knee his blade holding him to his high

He yells across the valley this is not how brothers should die
In the distance of the valley the yukata lady begins to cry.
As her teas fall down the assassin fades n does die

Two warriors from this earth gone and never coming back.
A reason for fighting sumthing as old as time
Two great masked shinobi forsaken what a crime

Battles over love will go on for all time 

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sv_iv (Svetlana) Wed Jun 11, 08 02:35 AM

good poem... when i was reading i saw in front of my eyes ther fight and drama... and as always on this earth a woman.... and two brothers die....

nice, very nice poem...

If you want to change the world, start by changing yourself
bloodyred666 (Bloody Red) Fri Jun 13, 08 04:29 PM

thats pretty cool i enjoyed reading that


HebaH2 (Hebah) Sun Jun 15, 08 12:42 PM

Am just a girl who want to pass through life without bothering anyone and possibly have as much friend as i can.
sanjay120 (sanjay) Tue Jun 17, 08 12:30 PM

really great stuff



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