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falling in the unknown - translation for bartolo 7
Size: Large, Medium, Small Thu Jun 18, 09 01:26 PM | Category: All
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I was looking for a title for this poem falling in the unknown or indifference were two suggestions made by bastia and ursu. 

Thank you for reading my post

 

you either laugh or cry, not even you're not sure

you want to see, to sleep, to hope... you dream.

you wait to leave, but come aside

to sing, to dance and fly up to the sky,

next to the snow that's hidding in the night. 

it just appears and then it dissapears,

throug clouds and reddish beams

sent from the sun that's beeing swalowed

by the water and  the earth that's crushed by our does.

only the scream persists around my whisper 

and maibe just a little crime that's hidding our lifes indifference.

the earth's not breathing, nor does it speak again.

it leaves us in the dark, not carring

that we consume it, nor let it leave no more. 


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Ursu_64 (Attila) Fri Jun 19, 09 10:51 AM

da, cum am mai spus, este ceva deosebit !

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iica Fri Jun 19, 09 01:49 PM

multumesc mult, dar cred ca si-a mai pierdut din farmec.


bartolo7 Fri Jun 19, 09 08:12 PM

thank you iica my friend it is very nice,i like a lot i told you if my friend says it is good it is,kiss

i´m your friend.never,well don´t forget that
iica Sat Jun 20, 09 12:59 PM

thank you very much


koyotee39 Sat Jun 20, 09 08:21 AM

good post..thanks


iica Sat Jun 20, 09 12:59 PM

thank you koyotee


Nuduan_Plus3000 (David) Thu Aug 20, 09 01:07 PM

GOOD JOB.

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Nuduan_Plus3000 (David) Thu Aug 20, 09 01:07 PM

I voted.

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Nuduan_Plus3000 (David) Thu Aug 20, 09 01:07 PM

Nice post

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iica Sun Aug 23, 09 03:35 AM

thank you for your visit and your vote


golf21986 (bleky) Sun Aug 30, 09 03:37 PM

really great poem, thank's for sharing

It's better to be a little bit crazy than little bit smart

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