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Shangrila
Size: Large, Medium, Small Mon Feb 4, 08 07:08 AM | Category: Poem
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THAT EVENING,
AFTER DINNER,
MICHI MARK MADE OCCASION
TO LEAVE THE OTHERS AND
STROLL OUT
 INTO THE CLAM,
MOON-WASHED COURTYARDS.

VOR HILL'S WAS
LOVELY THEN,
TOUCHED WITH THE MYSTERY
THAT LIES AT THE CORE
OF ALL LOVELINESS.
MICHI MARK WAS
PHYSICALLY HAPPY,EMOTIONALLY SATISFIED,
AND MENTALLY AT EASE.


   Written by:Michi 

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Link: http://blog.bitcomet.com/michi/post_15938/ ©
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addictanime (addict) Mon Feb 4, 08 08:36 AM

wierd poem hehe some how funny

i ll watch over you every night
Ichisanno (Michi) Mon Feb 4, 08 09:50 AM

mmm...

Thanks...

Wish I Had An Angel
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Mon Feb 4, 08 09:57 AM

It's a lovly poem Itachi. It's sounds like the begining of a story like the calm before a storm.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
Ichisanno (Michi) Mon Feb 4, 08 10:03 AM

Really?...

I made this one for the Person who waiting the "Daybreak"...

Wish I Had An Angel
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Fri Feb 22, 08 01:48 PM

I just noticed Itachi u said this on the day u were waiting for my first poem (What a boring observation). I'm thinking of writing another poem but i don't know what the subject should be. Oh well if i wait long enough these thing usaly come to me.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
Ichisanno (Michi) Fri Feb 22, 08 09:54 PM

mmm...maybe you can create a one poem about yourself.

I'll waiting for it.

Wish I Had An Angel
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Sat Feb 23, 08 02:30 AM

The poems usaly are about me or someone i know (Usually me). You need to know about and experience things to be able to write about them. Anyway i got the idea for next poem from you. It's not written yet so i am going to post another picture on my blog (And this time u don't have to wait till the sun goes down).

Make a wish on a shooting star.
Ichisanno (Michi) Sat Feb 23, 08 03:45 AM

hahaha...

Beside creating a good poems, you also have talent in making a joke...

At last, you already understand what the important element in making a good poems.

Wish I Had An Angel
MrGraphic Mon Feb 4, 08 10:19 AM

You really are good at writting poems !

Searching for love :)
Ichisanno (Michi) Mon Feb 4, 08 11:30 AM

Thanks...

Actually, It's nothing at all...

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fujiwarano_sai (shindo_hikaru) Mon Feb 4, 08 07:54 PM

Hehe. I'm not good in poem, so can you explain the meaning to me?

But I'm happy to you work hard on it.

Keep it on!!

Welcome to my blog! haha
Ichisanno (Michi) Mon Feb 4, 08 11:06 PM

Actually, I also still searching the true meaning...

All I can say, The writer is enjoying by himself after dinner and somehow he relaxing with nice place such as the sunset...

Wish I Had An Angel
ms_fairy Tue Feb 5, 08 03:31 PM

nice poem

In dreams and love there are no impossibilities
Ichisanno (Michi) Wed Feb 6, 08 04:17 AM

Thanks...

I hope you like it...

Wish I Had An Angel
thodie Wed Feb 6, 08 01:34 PM

very good, you're really talented!


Ichisanno (Michi) Wed Feb 6, 08 10:54 PM

Thanks...

Wish I Had An Angel
coolzaza (zaza) Wed Feb 6, 08 02:35 PM

hey man wow, that was gd, ll, anyway i thought u were translating the song Shangri-la by Angela. but anyway it is a nice poem hoping we read more of these

nothing in this world worth having comes easy
Ichisanno (Michi) Wed Feb 6, 08 10:55 PM

Thanks...

The poems is really amazing which I create for everyone...

Wish I Had An Angel
Guest Wed Feb 6, 08 11:08 PM

nice blog...


rgfmr Sat Feb 9, 08 04:15 PM

not bad to yours too..


Ichisanno (Michi) Sat Feb 9, 08 08:50 PM

mmm...

I see...

Anyway, thanks...

Wish I Had An Angel
rgfmr Sun Feb 10, 08 12:05 PM

nice music, although too dark the pictures


dave195809 (south african dave) Sun Feb 10, 08 02:03 AM

cool you deserve a vote for this

To all the fantastic people on bitcomet love you all
Ichisanno (Michi) Sun Feb 10, 08 04:46 AM

Thanks, pal.

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