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My Ideal Someone
Size: Large, Medium, Small Thu Aug 20, 09 04:49 PM | Category: Literature
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My Ideal Someone 

 

 

I once saw her clearly

Through my imagination´s eyes

A tall marvel standing solemnly

Crimson hair glowing towards the skies

 

She smiled at me a little and looked away

Her demeanor dark, serious yet kind

A thin silhouette with much pride in display

And that natural beauty so hard to find

 

Just a glance at her told me

She is not the romantic type

For her, reason is all that can be

Emotions are the fool´s stripes

 

Simple is the way she lives her life

Small pleasures provide her joy

She doesn´t need drama to feel alive

Complexity can´t be faked and used as a toy

 

Although unreal, she enlightened my happiness

I found her presence mesmerizing, hard to resist

After seeing her I take comfort in my loneliness

       Because I know she doesn´t and will never exist      

 

Written by Monti    

 

 

                               

                             

 

 "Close Encounters" by Mogwai       

 

Links to my other works

 

About darkness

 

One with silence

 

Isn´t she beautiful


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maschine9999 (Chris) Fri Aug 21, 09 10:26 AM

i like it 2

Come in and find out
Lozanka34 Fri Aug 21, 09 10:39 AM

Yes my friend....this is you...I saw your loneliness in your eyes...

Good luck in your work!

And Be happy my friend!


MaeLin (Mae Lin) Fri Aug 21, 09 01:26 PM

You write beautiful poetry, Monty. Really like your songs.


Omni_Libra1017 (Omni-Libra) Sat Aug 22, 09 12:17 AM

Lovely poem, I love it!

Thx for sharing =)

Voted~~

"Life is a bittersweet journey, so enjoy it." - Captain[CPT] - Tiramisu -
Ursu_64 (Attila) Sat Aug 22, 09 03:39 AM

very romantic, i like it !

Lt.-Gen. Ursu
mjm05 (darkcloud) Sat Aug 22, 09 05:23 AM

monti. yours always there to add somthing new, you brought me metal, from bands i never heard of.goths. now poems, music could cover shine on you crazy diamond, or meddle, it does let you escape. so al in all another fine work.

enjoy your weekend

how i wish you were here
radusheto (Radusheto) Sat Aug 22, 09 01:54 PM

Hey, Monti, that was great:) it is really touching, or maybe just for me... i like the things it makes me think of... the fact that no one is perfect and the pleasure of hoping that maybe he/she might be there... somewhere, someone...

Once again thanks for shearing:)

Radi


cyclamens Mon Aug 24, 09 06:09 AM

wonderfull poem, monty. GOOD LUCK

Cyclamens is happy to have you know. Back when you want!
pronaholtz (Pronaholtz) Mon Aug 24, 09 03:09 PM

GREAT have my vote

We can feel that we cannot see .
evans_kry (Evans_kry) Tue Aug 25, 09 11:59 AM

I liked it very good. ^^I liked it very good. ^^



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