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One With Silence
Size: Large, Medium, Small Thu Apr 24, 08 06:23 PM | Category: Literature
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One With Silence

 

As I walk towards twilight's glory

To reach the safety of the obscure

My mind gets caught in a story

Majestic, unheard and so pure

 

In solitude I summon my old friend

He who knows me better than myself

The one who leads me to transcend

Into the desolate moors of my inner self

 

Overwhelm by the symphony of stillness

I can clearly hear my thoughts and emotions

Away from modern life and its illness

I float free in silence's soothing oceans

 

Darkness my shelter, silence my guide

There is nothing I can not achieve

With them titans walking at my side

Until the final hour of death's relieve

 

Written by Monti 

 

 

  Song: "Sanies" by Star Of Ash 

 
 
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Ichisanno (Michi) Fri Apr 25, 08 12:10 AM

V.

Wish I Had An Angel
sv_iv (Svetlana) Fri Apr 25, 08 01:02 AM

Like the poem and music.

If you want to change the world, start by changing yourself
Sara1970 (Sara) Fri Apr 25, 08 01:53 AM

Beautyful Monti..you are very talented mate...

Take care

Always keep a dream in your heart!
debsha Fri Apr 25, 08 04:58 AM

That is beautiful & inspiring Monti

Be well & happy
christara Fri Apr 25, 08 09:26 AM

nice one mate,e you have a good use of words....cool.

all the best wish,s to you.......

take care

laters byeeeeeeeeeeeeee

its just mad being mad-its just crazy being crazy-but its great just being me
greta_garbage (gretagarbage) Wed Apr 30, 08 12:40 PM

i dont see u much as a poet and a romantic.but i have some lyrics for you: A friend in need's a friend indeed, a friend with weed is better/a friend with breasts and all the rest, a friend whos dressed in leather;)))

"Yes, I like my coffee hot and strong … Like I like my women: hot and ..strong … with a spoon in them."
greta_garbage (gretagarbage) Wed Apr 30, 08 04:46 PM

i didnt mean it that way, anyone who even feels the urge to write, is a poet, .compressing words is a matter

of extroversion, and youre lucky. u do have the power to express it.i only have one question.when u wrote this, it was purposed to be read by someone else? or just for you? why did u write it?(being academicaly correct goth poem it makes me wonder if it was an exercise, or a free gesture -people nowadays feel preconceived feelings.like scratching someone else's ass and feeling the scratch)

"Yes, I like my coffee hot and strong … Like I like my women: hot and ..strong … with a spoon in them."
dave1958 (dangerous dave) Thu May 1, 08 08:42 AM

cool post voted

all my love to everyone i meet
dave195809 (south african dave) Thu May 1, 08 09:15 AM

voted for you m8ty

To all the fantastic people on bitcomet love you all
Machkata Sat May 3, 08 07:18 PM

nice poem got my vote



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