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Isn’t she beautiful?
Size: Large, Medium, Small Mon Mar 23, 09 07:51 PM | Category: Literature
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In the darkening horizon

Of an ethereal evening past

As I cried, her smile wizened

And lifted her soul was at last

 

Or so the Father said to me

He believed she no longer was

Although I never fully agree

Is empty this mirage with no flaws?

 

She seems as embedded in a still life

Livid lips drawing a sweet grimace

In my gentle kiss the luminous love is rife

As the bodies collide I feel amazed

 

Isn't she beautiful?

Her silky skin cold and tender

Isn't she beautiful?

Her love for me hasn't surrendered

 

Wrong were the wedding vows

In her arms I now know with all my heart

That although she may never arouse

Not even death could do us apart

 

Written by Monti

 

 

 

Song: "Look Into The Air" by Explosions in the Sky 


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anjoloi Tue Mar 24, 09 03:24 PM

i like you

i wish your body

Of everything to my love I will be intent Before, and with such zeal, and always, and as much That exactly in face of the biggest enchantment Of it if
hooheehoo Tue Mar 24, 09 05:11 PM

An verey excellent and descriptive piece of work. Thought it was outstanding. If you haven't already then a publication of this and similar works acompanied by the pictures should go into a hard or paperback publication


bastia Tue Mar 24, 09 05:49 PM

nice point of view... bring more

law is made to be broken
pronaholtz (Pronaholtz) Tue Mar 24, 09 05:59 PM

you have my vote .

nice to see you again too .

We can feel that we cannot see .
luthienessa Tue Mar 24, 09 06:25 PM

hm.....what do you want me to say? dramatic poem...it's about you or not..it's still a dramatic, dark, sad but beautiful poem....

::Carpé diem ad multam noctum::
cristianh (akah) Tue Mar 24, 09 06:40 PM

ya very good at that bro!

not that I expect alse from ya!

ya gifted in deed

All religion, my friend, is simply evolved out of fraud, fear, greed, imagination, and poetry.
MaeLin (Mae Lin) Tue Mar 24, 09 08:00 PM

dark and very deep...beautifully written, Monty...


antonio_pupu (antonio) Tue Mar 24, 09 08:24 PM

i feel like am in love with that girl....he he...beautiful....keep up the good work...


kathyhughes283 (kathy) Tue Mar 24, 09 08:50 PM

Very beauitful Monti I voted

Kathy
bartolo7 Tue Mar 24, 09 11:24 PM

POETICAL,NICELY,WIDESPRIDE.CONGRATULATIONS,I LOVE,Greetings

i´m your friend.never,well don´t forget that

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