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My Real Light
Size: Large, Medium, Small Tue Nov 11, 08 02:56 PM | Category: My Poem
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still i feel so arrogant
fly my reverie so far far away
the sky will catch me
even i falling down apart

 

and if everything is created
just for me to feel
everything which created
just for me to feel empty

 

so tired my gaze searching around
for a meaning to share
accompany my steps
silent and meaningless

 

and if everything created
without me have to feel

the scrap of love
empty this life i feel

 

There's stars in heaven
and every colors
and there's love so pure
and a real light so warm

 

I want to feel it
to fulfil my emptiness


Oh stars in heaven
give me a story
and a faithful love
and a real light....

 

 

 

 


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pronaholtz Tue Nov 11, 08 03:06 PM

So very good poem .

i vote

We can feel that we cannot see .
debsha Tue Nov 11, 08 03:23 PM

that is both beautiful and sad my dear friend..

Be well & happy
monti_84 Tue Nov 11, 08 06:00 PM

that′s a sad one my friend...got my vote...

"To define is to limit" Oscar Wilde
ms_fairy Wed Nov 12, 08 03:26 AM

In dreams and love there are no impossibilities
pappuca Thu Nov 13, 08 03:34 AM

Romantic,beautiful sad!But I like it!Vote!


christara Thu Nov 13, 08 07:06 AM

well what can i say,..its so lovely but so sad,...

for love shall shine a light down upon you,to lightern the emptiness,

all the best wish,s to you and your family.......

take care

laters byeeeeeeeeeeeeee

its just mad being mad-its just crazy being crazy-but its great just being me
skandranon Thu Nov 13, 08 08:17 AM

very beautiful my friend

" Your only as old as the woman you feel "
kathyhughes283 (kathy) Thu Nov 13, 08 09:37 AM

that was so beauitful my friend I Voted

Kathy
lilWH (Shotta) Fri Nov 14, 08 05:08 PM

Nice..


mgdv8899 Sat Nov 15, 08 03:01 PM

nice 1 & wishing you all the best my friend!



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