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Size: Large, Medium, Small Mon Feb 18, 08 11:00 AM | Category: Stories
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This is the tale of this little girl to whom people has made to expect that love will come and take her. 

 

Once upon a time, a long time ago, a little girl has been dreaming to have a great and beautiful love.She dreamed to a boy, then later to a stranger to whom she will give her life, her body, her soul.

Time passed by and the beautiful love did not come. She looked for him everywhere in every smile, in every look, in every person she met.For a very long time, she was sure that love would come towards her, would recognize her among others and tell her:

 

 -        Yes, I was looking for you; I came for you, only you. And that little girl grew and looked like her other friends and women, she gave up her beautiful dream and went out with a fellow who passed by.

She was not still aware that she had betrayed herself, because she did not come upon any love, or pleasure, or the possibility to dream her life.

As time passed by, her body kept the trace of this story which was ordinary at the beginning, then mediocre and at last sordid. 

 

After that, she came close to pleasure and afraid by the possibility to share.Then one day after a long time, she discovered deep inside herself, a kind of an extraordinary strength which pushed her towards a man she did not wait for or expected. He was there without her knowledge.

 

It was only at this moment that she awakened.

Like a source, it irrigated every gesture, it brightened every speech, and it germinated possibilities that she did not have even thought of before.

It was like an inward earthquake that shook all her life.

She who had waited for so long with the hope of seeing love coming toward her from outside, just discovered astonished, with amazement that this love  dozed until now deep down inside her. She discovered that she had put this love in the secret of her body.

The man, to whom she gave that unexpected love, was so surprised, the first time that he doubted about this feeling so mad and so sudden and was a bit afraid at the beginning.  

   -        I do not deserve this love, he thought she must be mistaken and take me for another.But it was him that she has chosen, only him.

I cannot tell the continuation of the tale since it happened at a time when human loves were so great, so exaggerated by those who received them that they became legends.

And I cannot drag anybody in a dream which cannot find its place in real life unless you listen very carefully to your heart… 

 

 

 

 

 

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monti_84 Mon Feb 18, 08 11:11 AM

Nice post!

"To define is to limit" Oscar Wilde
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Mon Feb 18, 08 12:07 PM

I like it.

Quetion: Why is this written by an Unknown author? Did u not write it?

It's lovly either way.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Mon Feb 18, 08 12:24 PM

She expected it to come from someone else not from herself.

When actualy it must come from both.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
coolzaza (zaza) Mon Feb 18, 08 03:32 PM

wow, nice and touchin story, i like it= 1vote

nothing in this world worth having comes easy
CoM555 Mon Feb 18, 08 03:57 PM

good

" .. The path of hate doesn't lead to satisfaction. It only leads to more hate.. "
Ichisanno (Michi) Tue Feb 19, 08 12:01 AM

Love is something special feeling than anyone must facing it for someday.

mmm...

Wish I Had An Angel
turbo2tone (aling) Tue Feb 19, 08 01:07 AM

That's why I must listen more often to my heart.

Very nice indeed...

Every day is a another nice day....!!!
m7dystahl Tue Feb 19, 08 06:16 AM

nice job..

I like it..

thanx 4 shareing..


Guest Thu Feb 21, 08 01:50 AM

gooood


bimalchathurinda (bimal) Thu Feb 21, 08 01:52 AM

good



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