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Size: Large, Medium, Small Mon Feb 11, 08 05:53 AM | Category: My Stories
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Life's darkness and light,

Overcast skies and brillaint sunshine,

Verge of tears and brink of happiness,

Exquisite but so polar you never know wheather it's a blessing or a curse.

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Link: http://blog.bitcomet.com/post/16665/ ©
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noural Mon Feb 11, 08 06:56 AM

LOVE... and you shall be LOVED

"We must learn to live together like Brothers and Sisters or we will die like fools."
Psycho1983 Mon Feb 11, 08 07:18 AM

nice lil′ rhyme!


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Mon Feb 11, 08 01:29 PM

It doesn't rhyme it's free verse.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Sun Mar 23, 08 03:58 AM

Thanks though.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
ms_fairy Mon Feb 11, 08 02:24 PM

nice

In dreams and love there are no impossibilities
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Tue Feb 12, 08 12:49 AM

Thanks.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Tue Feb 12, 08 08:36 AM

i think loves a curse

sumtyms

cool peom tho

p.s who's shezzle


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Wed Feb 13, 08 01:02 AM

Shezzle will reveal herself to u in her own time. (I wish she would hurry up i feel abit mean.)

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Tue Apr 8, 08 12:13 PM

love makes you care too much


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Tue Apr 8, 08 03:14 PM

Is that why you are in a bad mood? Can i help? I hate seeing a friend upset and if i could i would visit you and give you a big hug (It probaly wouldn't help but at least then i would feel like i'm doing something rather than feeling rather useless).

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Thu Apr 10, 08 06:02 PM

not the reason

you probably couldn't help, but thanks for taking the time to care

your not useless


Abiosix Wed Feb 13, 08 09:53 AM

The length of the poem reminds me of Emily Dickinson's four line poems.

This one is my favourite:

Fame is a bee.

It has a song -

It has a sting -

Ah, too, it has a wing.

Okay, but the words and the content are a bit clichéd (I don't want to hurt you, I just see it this way) but keep on writing...

The previous one was much better... :)

There's always some light in clair-obscur.
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Sun Mar 23, 08 04:10 AM

Nice poem I've never heard of the writer of it before though.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
Ichisanno (Michi) Wed Feb 13, 08 09:58 AM

Not bad...

Wish I Had An Angel
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Sun Mar 23, 08 03:57 AM

Thanks.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Wed Feb 13, 08 10:22 AM

get it copyrighted!!!


Abiosix Wed Feb 13, 08 03:53 PM

From the moment it appears here it is protected by the copyright...

Anything you publish on BitComet blog can't be spread further without your permission (or even without permission of BitComet - I'm not sure)...

There's always some light in clair-obscur.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Fri Feb 15, 08 04:26 AM

Actually everything on here can be copied

If you get your stuff copyrighted, it is illegal for anyone to copy it and claim it as their own


Abiosix Sun Feb 17, 08 10:25 AM

Shezz, you're completely wrong... You can find many sources on the internet providing you with information about the copyright and all of them say something like this:

.....

Copyright Protection

"Your work is under copyright protection the moment it is created and fixed in a tangible form so that it is perceptible either directly or with the aid of a machine or device. The moment you write it, paint it, or put it on the internet, your work is copyright protected."

(source: http://inventors.about.com/od/copyrights/a/copyright.htm)

There's always some light in clair-obscur.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Sat Mar 8, 08 02:22 PM

I'm not called shezz


Shezzle (RuDeNeSs) Thu Apr 10, 08 06:24 AM

i am though


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Thu Apr 10, 08 10:22 AM

Don't mind me.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Thu Apr 10, 08 10:29 AM

Nearly finished.

Done.

I'm realy bored.

Make a wish on a shooting star.

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