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Size: Large, Medium, Small Mon Feb 11, 08 01:22 PM | Category: All
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Hii i felt free so i decided to write a poem

 

 

althought its not that much

 

but

 

its good enough

 

 

i hope ^^ coz it will be u my dear reader and visitor to comment

 

so feel free to express your heart contants about this one

 

and thanks all for the lovly comments

 

I feel so incomplete...
Not knowing what to do, 
I don’t know what to say, or even be, 
I feel I am nothing without you.
You think you have something so special,
And it’s true you really do,
But when those feelings start to fade,
You feel lost; with no one there 
to reassure you.
You can try only your hardest,
For so long, to do the best you can do, 
I’m so scared and confused and 
unhappy right now,
I lose everything when I lose you.
Trying to be strong is so hard,
I don’t know how much longer I can try, 
In my head there are so many questions,
Of where did we go wrong, And Why?
Nothing happens without a reason,
I just wish it wasn’t so hard 
with all this pain,
So many dreams were shattered today,
How do I try to maintain?
Will things ever be the same again?
I’m not sure and I have no clue, 
How am I supposed to deal with myself?
I’m terrified and don’t know what else
 to do.

I hate feeling this way,
So full of pain and sorrow, 
But how can I deal with today,
When it won’t get any easier tomorrow?
I know I could make it by myself,
But my mind starts to wander and roam,
I don’t know loving any other way,
And now I’m completely alone.
 
 
SO what do u people 
 
comment dear visitors at my mobile phone
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cant wait to hear from you ^^
 
juuust kidding ^^ u can comment down i will be sure to see it
as soon as i have time 

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sd10100 Mon Feb 11, 08 03:53 PM

thats a nice one indeed....


Zero23 Mon Feb 11, 08 04:24 PM

thank you man and welcome to the blog

glad to see your comment

and your always welcome

.... Zero23
Psycho1983 Mon Feb 11, 08 03:59 PM

not bad!


Zero23 Mon Feb 11, 08 04:24 PM

thank you man moost appreciated

c ya

.... Zero23
Ichisanno (Michi) Wed Feb 13, 08 10:47 AM

Nice one...

Wish I Had An Angel
walyy Tue Feb 19, 08 08:02 AM

ok...


dave195809 (south african dave) Sat Apr 5, 08 03:39 PM

well done great one

To all the fantastic people on bitcomet love you all

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