HI
its been a while i didnt add anything and since more people started to visit and come to the blog then i do beleive i own this people a new post
I would love to hear every bodys comments about this poem because your opinion is so critcal and helping
and would love to thank all who visits the blog and comments because they are who makes this blog a bright place
I know i might have choosen a name close to James Blunt song - "You're Beautiful" because i can basically consider this poem encourge the search of beautiness inside our souls in all conditions
comments can be placed down at the cahsier so your all most welcome.
People come and go
Some you will remember while some you won’t even know
But once in a lifetime comes the best
One you can’t just forget like the rest
One who doesn’t have to be put to the test
Cause it wouldn’t effect the result
You see; it doesn’t matter who you are
Whether you live near or far
It doesn’t matter if you drive a rusty car
Or appear pity , you’re always a star
Hell I don’t even care what you do
Or how you came into my life and made it new
I know I haven’t yet even seen you
But it’s enough to hear you
It feels like you’re something I always knew
It hurts me even when you have the flu
Or when your tooth hurts and your shine turns to blue
I know I’ve only known you for a few
But it feels like sooo long you don’t have any clue
I hope you realize your sweetness and the sprinkle in your eyes
And never allow people to tell you lies
Or let anyone convince you otherwise
You’re the sweetest thing I’ve come to realize
It doesnt matter what I don’t know about you
But times come and will broach me to you
Cause You’re always be an angel in my eyes...
So how was it? ...
I would thank you for readin the peom
Cause its you who makes it shine like a moon
^_^
