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Bitter Autumn
Size: Large, Medium, Small Sat Feb 16, 08 02:24 PM | Category: poetry
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Bitter Autumn

 

What has the autumn done tu us?
That endless wind, that heavy rain...
Your fingers strunggling the glass
My eyes with tears and bitter pain.
It's over now, thought hurts a lot
Forgive it please, the autumn's game.
We could be happy, but we're not
Forsake its song, forget its name
Why had the song been cruel and dead?
How could it do it all to us?
It's stolen happiness we've had
And buried flowers into grass
Forgive it all; the empty sky
The trees are grey, the sun so red
The inner feeling meant to die,
The bitter autumn we have had.
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walyy Sat Feb 16, 08 03:43 PM

ceva diferit...


cosmins (Osman) Sat Feb 16, 08 03:58 PM

Mda...

2 voturi.


monti_84 Sat Feb 16, 08 10:45 PM

Very nice, i like it a lot. It is a shame that in my country we only have two seasons, so I′ve only seem autumn in movies and pictures. I′ve heard it is a melancholic season as your beautiful poem.

Keep on!

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Ichisanno (Michi) Sun Feb 17, 08 12:18 AM

Good one,

Especially, the art of the picture...

Wish I Had An Angel
Denisuca (denis) Sun Feb 17, 08 06:55 AM

ca sa ma crezi ca mi-au placut versurile am si votat, foarte interesant!


dave195809 (south african dave) Sun Feb 17, 08 05:28 PM

lovely gave you a vote

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mjm05 (darkcloud) Tue Feb 19, 08 01:05 PM

very chilled blog ,like it a lot, where i come from we now have one season .... wet

take care

One slip, and down the hole we fall It seems to take no time at all A momentary lapse of reason That binds a life for life A small regret, you won
sv_iv Sat Apr 5, 08 11:00 AM

nice.... voted

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christara Tue Apr 8, 08 02:00 PM

you have got a way with words very nice...

all the best wish,s to you.......

take care

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