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My Heart's Key
Size: Large, Medium, Small Thu Mar 13, 08 04:33 PM | Category: poems
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An ache strong and real

That I can not turn away

I am sure that what I feel

Is here to stay

 

While it's a light in darkness

It's a burden I must bear

Because I fear the mess

That could happen if I share

 

One day I hope to set my secret free

And to give you my heart's key.

 

©Hyped-Up Courtesy of Wonderland's Gateway

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Qmei (vivian) Fri Mar 14, 08 12:29 AM

What happened?


shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Fri Mar 14, 08 02:27 PM

you would have to ask wonderland in order to find out, she wrote it.


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Tue Mar 25, 08 08:19 AM

I fancie another guy i can't have. That's what happened.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Tue Mar 25, 08 02:35 PM

and i know who it is heeheehee!


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Sat Mar 29, 08 03:47 AM

Make a wish on a shooting star.
Ichisanno (Michi) Fri Mar 14, 08 02:14 AM

mmm...not bad.

Wish I Had An Angel
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Fri Mar 14, 08 02:26 PM

thanks, glad that you like it


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Tue Mar 25, 08 08:21 AM

Thanks. (Seeing as this a compliment for one of my poems i might as well take it.)

Make a wish on a shooting star.
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Sun Mar 16, 08 03:31 AM

What's this doing here? I am going to murder Shezzle she said she wasn't going to do anything with it when she kid... poemnapped it.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Thu Mar 20, 08 12:23 PM

i'm glad that she did give it to me, it shows a lot about your feelings (and i have a sneaky suspicion on who exactly it is about from the hints that shezz has given me)

xxx


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Tue Mar 25, 08 08:20 AM

Who do you think it is? Shezzle refuses top believe she gave you any hints.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Tue Mar 25, 08 02:36 PM

i shan't say here, it would not be appropriate


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Wed Mar 26, 08 02:08 AM

Are you getting back at me?

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Thu Mar 27, 08 09:12 AM

what for???


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Fri Mar 28, 08 06:37 AM

For not telling you who Shezzle was.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Fri Mar 28, 08 08:21 AM

no i'm not getting back at you.

xxx


walyy Mon Mar 17, 08 05:47 PM


shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Thu Mar 20, 08 12:23 PM
Sara1970 (Sara) Mon Mar 24, 08 10:37 PM

It's a beautiful poem and I'm glad you shared it.

Always keep a dream in your heart!
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Tue Mar 25, 08 08:24 AM

I didn't have much choice. (Maybe if i get piece of rope mumble. mumble.)

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Tue Mar 25, 08 02:36 PM

too right you didn't, it's too good to be thrown away like so many others...


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Wed Mar 26, 08 02:07 AM

This good? It's just my thoughts. What would you want with them. (I guess it's better than the weird one about fish i wrote ages ago.)

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Thu Mar 27, 08 09:12 AM

it's better than any that i could do.


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Fri Mar 28, 08 06:36 AM

Lonliness was good (But i've forgotten how it went...). I realy enjoyed reading it.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Fri Mar 28, 08 07:29 AM

it's on here somewhere...



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