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Size: Large, Medium, Small Mon Mar 24, 08 04:27 AM | Category: My Stories
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What is over the horison?,

Anything good? Anything special?,

Infinate questions for the future,

Today turns into tomorrow,

Infinate answers evade me,

Nothing seems to change,

Gazing into a future that doesn't seem to come.

 

Waiting is not a strong piont of mine so i tried to post this poem on my blog as soon as possible. I can't wait to hear what you guys think.

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Link: http://blog.bitcomet.com/post/20042/ ©
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sv_iv Mon Mar 24, 08 04:57 AM

Very nice poem.

I wish you good changes in life

If you want to change the world, start by changing yourself
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Tue Mar 25, 08 07:38 AM

I wish for changes now :(

Make a wish on a shooting star.
Ichisanno (Michi) Mon Mar 24, 08 08:35 AM

I Voted for you!

Wish I Had An Angel
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Tue Mar 25, 08 07:39 AM

Thank you.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Mon Mar 24, 08 03:11 PM

I wonder what inspired this poem...

it's good

xxx


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Tue Mar 25, 08 07:40 AM

Our conversations. I've got another on called FEAR but i won't put it on quite yet.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Tue Mar 25, 08 02:47 PM

i thought so. please hurry with the next poem, i luv seeing them. hows the war with mum? wish you all the best babe.

xxx


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Wed Mar 26, 08 02:03 AM

Not good. :(

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Thu Mar 27, 08 09:15 AM

we can always for better in the near future (war tactics usually work)


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Fri Mar 28, 08 06:25 AM

I think you missed out hope. What tactics do you suggest?

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Fri Mar 28, 08 07:15 AM

oops! tactics are usually best discussed with people who can help.


shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Sat Apr 5, 08 09:55 AM

been discussing tactics with anyone

(it really does help )


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Sat Apr 5, 08 11:29 AM

Nope. Though Shezzle agreed near the begining of this war that if i needed to get away i could stay the night at hers :) It's dieing down now anyway. If i am lucky i might be able to use MSN by the end of the month.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Sun Apr 6, 08 10:01 AM

glad all is going well for some


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Mon Apr 7, 08 08:14 AM

What's up? :( I don't like it when the people around me are sad.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Tue Apr 8, 08 12:07 PM

the whole god damn system is up


VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Tue Apr 8, 08 03:03 PM

Make a wish on a shooting star.
shezz_luvin_hoo (hyped-up) Thu Apr 10, 08 06:01 PM

doesn't matter


monti_84 Mon Mar 24, 08 08:08 PM

very good, i like it...got my vote...

"To define is to limit" Oscar Wilde
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Tue Mar 25, 08 07:40 AM

Thank you i'm glad you liked it.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
muddshuvel Tue Mar 25, 08 02:37 PM

like it! When it comes to the future, there are three kinds of people: those who let it happen, those who make it happen, and those who wonder what happened. don't spend the whole time waiting...

life is short,...play naked!
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Wed Mar 26, 08 02:04 AM

I'll try not to.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
dave195809 (south african dave) Sat Apr 5, 08 03:34 PM

voted hi again

To all the fantastic people on bitcomet love you all
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Sun Apr 6, 08 04:16 AM

Thanks.

P.s. I don't like apples.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
dave1958 (dangerous dave) Mon Apr 7, 08 01:34 PM

hi there voted

all my love to everyone i meet
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Tue Apr 8, 08 03:41 PM

Hi. I realy like the dragon.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
walyy Mon Apr 14, 08 02:53 PM

nice


walyy Mon Apr 14, 08 02:58 PM
VioletShimmer (Wonderland) Wed Apr 16, 08 04:03 PM

Thanks. Nice flowers.

Make a wish on a shooting star.
gazdoc Mon May 26, 08 03:59 PM

Nice poem Violet

Hope your dreams come true

Ennnnnnnnjoy
christara Fri Jun 27, 08 09:18 AM

very nice....like it...waiting is a pain...but the wait can be good if the thing is worth waiting for...

all the best wish,s to you.

take care

laters byeeeeeeeeeeeeee

its just mad being mad-its just crazy being crazy-but its great just being me

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