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if I was
Size: Large, Medium, Small Tue Sep 2, 08 05:42 PM | Category: Poem
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if I was ...

 

 

a tear:


I would like to be born in eyes


dripping onto your cheek

 

and rest on your lips

 

 

 

a boat:

 

my boat have your name


whose port attaches your heart


I sail on an ocean of  your love


my sails blown by the wind happyness


guided by the love that I have for you

 

 

a bird:


I fly in the blue sky of our love


back in the nest of love


for you to feed my kisses


give you all my love


in this warm nest that is our love

 

 

a mirror:

 

I reflete only our face


and see in your eyes shine your love joy

 

the joy and love that expression

 

your face has breath the full love


only to reflect is immortal


as my love for you

 

 


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luthienessa Tue Sep 2, 08 05:47 PM

Nice poem.....Lucky for her...

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ms_fairy Wed Sep 3, 08 08:33 AM

nice poem..I like it

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bdboys (Ashok) Thu Sep 4, 08 12:39 AM

Nice Poem dude .............

i Like It.............

And U GOT MY VOTE...............

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dave1958 (dangerous dave) Thu Sep 4, 08 09:22 AM

cool post love it

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Nice voted!


debsha Fri Sep 5, 08 10:51 AM

beautiful my friend

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koceto_cska Sun Sep 7, 08 08:40 AM

Very nice... Voted!

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sv_iv (Svetlana) Thu Sep 11, 08 11:18 AM

A VERY VERY nice poem...

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kathyhughes283 (kathy) Sun Sep 14, 08 10:09 AM

very nice post

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