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The Struggle We Call Life
Size: Large, Medium, Small Tue Mar 10, 09 02:58 PM | Category: All
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How can someone talk to me and say how i should live?

Giving me a lecture, and telling me how it is.

Answer, why should i care what they think of me?

Why can't i do the things i want, just live my life freely?

I feel like they are watching, every move i make,

Waiting to accuse me if a make a small mistake,

I know I cannot blame them, just look at what i've done,

But why should I surrender when the fight has just begun?

I know I might not make it, but I still have to try,

Because giving up is worse than if I were to die,

Success is my objective, though hell stands in my way,

And what I soon will go through, I have not words to say,

I speak these words to you because for you its not too late,

Don't give into the pain, for that just leads to hate,

If I had known what I do now, I may have won the fight,

But sometimes you're crawling in the dark, before you see the light.
By: XAONIX
The Tainted Hero

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BLACKPEPPER Wed Mar 11, 09 04:01 PM

INTERESTING !

David Claus
xaonix (The Tainted Hero) Wed Mar 11, 09 04:37 PM

Thanks, it is a little strange

What can a man give in exchange for his soul?
mobarobber Thu Mar 12, 09 03:36 AM

I remember going through this phase not too long ago.. Its dark, but interesting... I am not going to tell anyone not to go through it... To each his own mistakes!

Good Work.


xaonix (The Tainted Hero) Thu Mar 12, 09 05:33 PM

I don't know why i write these, or where i get the ideas. Its kind of like an outlet from the real world. (from what you said, it seems you already know this)

What can a man give in exchange for his soul?
Harman354 (Black Rider) Fri Mar 13, 09 11:53 AM

gr8 work dude keep rocking !!


Gamer510 Sat Mar 14, 09 05:41 PM

Loved it.

"Pain, Pride, Pushing, Surviving" - Me
DaSt3R (Da5t3R-ation) Mon Mar 16, 09 02:46 AM

Good piece of literature very profound

Hmmmm signatures usually I'd write something along the lines of "I haven't written in here yet" but maybe this requires something more profound.......
debsha Mon Mar 16, 09 01:34 PM

Thanks for sharing this with us. I believe we ahve to go through things to make us what we are

Be well & happy
xaonix (The Tainted Hero) Tue Mar 17, 09 06:04 PM

Thanks to all for reading, and to those who voted.

What can a man give in exchange for his soul?
Nuduan_Plus3000 (David) Thu May 14, 09 02:16 PM

I voted.

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